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Contest Winner! Post 2 from Teen Writer Jordyn H. Rockstar
In her second day of featuring her work at calebbreakey.com, Teen Writer Jordyn H. Rockstar brings us a poem and an excerpt from one of her wonderful stories. Great work, Jordyn!
First piece:
On the subject of right or wrong,
Why is of nothing said any harm?
Why are we neutral?
Why not stand our ground?
Are we just the water,
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Contest Winner! Post 1 from Teen Writer Jordyn H. Rockstar
This is the first of two sections of work shared by Hookrpt Contest winner Jordyn H. Rockstar, who you voted best! Congratulations, Jordyn. Can’t wait to spread these to the masses on Facebook and Twitter!
First piece:
Cool air blew through the uncut grass, its soft fingers sweeping through the wildflowers. Gently it carried whispers and songs to the ears of the two figures lying still in the meadow. Songbirds joined it in chorus, harmonizing in a joyous melody. Sunshine danced through the tall, emerald blades of grass, playing upon the faces of the couple, filtering through his messy golden hair, shining in her deep brown eyes.
She lay back against him, and he, back against the ground. A picnic blanket, two jackets, and used plates lay nearby, centerpieces for a table made of flattened grass. But the two lay apart, in grass that bent over them, hidden in their own small world. They laughed together in simple conversation, elated just by each other’s company.
“Do you want to know a secret?” Continue reading
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Teen Writer Intro: Jackie H. Rockstar
INTERVIEW QUOTE: I mostly write FanFiction for books, and shows incorporating my own character and twisting the plot. The genre in my general writing varies. I have Fantasy, then I have Science Fiction, down to Historical Fiction.
SUBMISSION EXCERPT: Pale blue-green eyes open up to the thundering night as the room flashed with brightness. The beat of the rain on the roof and windows was not a comforting thing to Eden.
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Derek Jeter 3000th Hit: What Jeter Told Me About Chasing Dreams
Caleb Jennings Breakey
Former Associate Reporter
MLB.com
NEW YORK — The Yankees had won and all the reporters were finishing interviews in the New York clubhouse. A couple of them thanked Mariano Rivera for his time, and a scattered few did the same around Jorge Posada. I fidgeted by number 2′s locker, hoping the Captain would arrive before I lost courage.
The clubhouse door closed and I knew I was the last reporter standing amid the lockers of legends. I prayed security wouldn’t shuffle me out. I had to talk to Derek Jeter face-to-face, human being-to-human being.
In hindsight, I don’t know what I was thinking.
When he finally came out of the trainer’s room, I froze. Without my professional facade, I suddenly felt like a credential-less nobody.
“How’s it going, buddy?” Jeter said with his never-changing calmness and matching demeanor.
A warm guilt ran through me. Just like all of my childhood friends, I had loved hating the Yankees. So naturally I hadn’t liked “pretty-boy” Jeter. How I wish I could take those thoughts back and replace them with honor and respect.
“Going well, thank you.” In spite of my rehearsed transition, it came out awkward. “I … just finished reading your book.”
“Oh yeah?”
“It meant a lot. I mean, it’s really good. Everything you said about chasing your dream and doing the right thing.”
“Thank you, man—really appreciate that,” Jeter said, sliding his arms into a collared shirt. “What’s your dream?”
His question caught me totally off guard. I had gone into the clubhouse wanting to thank him for encouraging me to chase my dreams. But I’d gotten so caught up in the thought of chasing that I never considered my dream. Now I felt naked standing there.
“To write words that make a difference,” I fumbled out.
He grabbed his jacket from his locker, and I immediately felt like I should go. He had places to go, people to see, a city to own. But … there was something about his eyes. He wasn’t telling me to go.
“Looks like your well on your way, buddy,” Jeter said. “Where you from?”
“Seattle.”
“You’re a long way from home then.” He bent to grab his shoes and laced up. Then he stood and added, “Dreams do that sometimes. That’s good. “
We shook hands and I thanked him.
“We’ll see you tomorrow, buddy.”
Four years later as Jeter collected his 3,000th hit—a homer—in style against Rays pitcher David Price, I remembered his words anew.
Dreams.
They are never easy.
They take us a long way from home sometimes—out of our comfort zone and into a world filled with as much resistance as opportunity.
And yet out dreams come the Martin Luther Kings of this world.
Out of dreams come the rebuilding and healing of the greatest city in America.
Out of dreams comes fruition that elevates moments into so much more than ticks of the clock. Moments like the third inning on Saturday as the Yankees faced the Rays.
When Jeter rounded first base, it was as if every fan and every player who’d ever donned pinstripes lifted him up, taking off the weight of his dream just long enough for him to levitate into something greater than a ballplayer.
A picture of a dream fulfilled.
A small-town shortstop from Kalamazoo, Michigan who became the face of the most storied franchise in baseball history.
All because…
He believed in what he did and who he was.
He never gave up or listened to those who said he couldn’t.
He pressed on humbly and fearlessly toward his vision, all the while taking the time to show a young writer that dreams are hard, and that “That’s good.”
I thank you, Derek Jeter, for the example you are.
For always playing the man even when people judged you wrongly.
For letting us be a part of your journey as you’ve chased this beautiful thing called a dream.
And for paying if forward.
I thank you 3,000 times, buddy.
Caleb Jennings Breakey is a former associate reporter for MLB.com. Catch more of his work and videos at www.calebbreakey.com.
Teen Writer Intro: Julian M. Rockstar
INTERVIEW QUOTE: I hope to get many poems, articles and stories published in magazines.
SUBMISSION EXCERPT: Let’s face it. Fast food is convenient, cheap, and tasty. That’s why billions of people have eaten there and that’s why those billions will continue to eat it.
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And…we’re back!
Now that the contest has concluded, normal features will begin again on Thursday.
On a side note: So far, author Mike Dellosso hasn’t been inundated with young writers (see here for details). This is both a bad and good thing. Bad that Mike’s offering something great and hasn’t gotten a ton of bites. Good that you could be the one who gets your work critiqued from a published author.
I should have mentioned this before, but…
Knowing an author is oftentimes better than knowing an editor or agent. Authors know when to go to bat for a writer. So to get your work in front of Mike is a very, very good thing. I’m not saying he’ll send you straight to a publisher. But connections and edits from an author like Mike is a GREAT thing. Don’t miss it.
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